pathetic.org :: nineteenth. by Melanie J Yarbrough

nineteenth.

I do need stories to tell my children-
but I wanted you to be
ever so much more
than just a story.

07/19/2005

Posted on 07/19/2005
Copyright © 2024 Melanie J Yarbrough

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Paul Marino on 07/20/05 at 05:39 AM

that third line is interesting. i'm not sure if it works, but i like that about it.

Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 02/03/07 at 01:41 PM

powerful. but...the people who will be legends in the end...you will never need to HOPE they will be...;) they just are.

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