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Straight and Narrow

by Richard Vince

Let’s change our minds…
And see what they give us
In return for ourselves

Will we get a consciousness
With walls of clichés
Built on foundations of conventions?

If a picture paints a thousand words
Can a thousand words paint a picture?
Maybe a thousand is more than we need
But what we need, and what we want…
Are they ever the same?
And do we stay as ourselves
When we become what we do?

Isn’t it funny
How straight and narrow
Always stick together?

12/18/2000

Posted on 07/16/2005
Copyright © 2025 Richard Vince

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 07/17/05 at 09:59 PM

Richard, this poem brings out the idea that some questions can't be answered with words or pictures. They either have no answer or must be answered in the spirit and heart. Your poem is like the waves, always returning to shore, just as our hearts and minds are always searching for answers that may not be found immediately.
~Chelle~

Posted by Amy Niggel on 07/18/05 at 06:20 PM

I like this a lot, made me stop and think about things for a few moments which is what I always look for in a poem and ultimately always find in yours. Good job.

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