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Kiss ('haiku') revised

Curly hair
and a michievous grin.
Which to kiss?

07/14/2005

Author's Note:
Just a tweek to change the emotion slightly

Posted on 07/14/2005
Copyright © 2024 Paganini Jones

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Erin Eymard on 07/14/05 at 05:59 PM

I definitely like the change to the last line. It's beautifully written and I love the open ending.

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