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Life's Short [Senryu]

by Jeffrey Parren

sandier toes
i sit beached, watching sunset
ponder existence

07/12/2005

Author's Note: Feeling a little lost these days...

Posted on 07/12/2005
Copyright © 2024 Jeffrey Parren

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Maureen Glaude on 07/13/05 at 01:00 AM

I love it. Wish I were doing it now.

Posted by David R Spellman on 07/13/05 at 02:17 AM

great picture drawn here - also wishing I was in the same kind of local and mode! Well done.

Posted by Paul Marino on 09/20/05 at 09:30 AM

i can see this scene pretty clearly. nice.

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