|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Frankie Sanchez on 07/08/05 at 07:16 PM|
holy mother of... this is hot and raw and playful and intriguing. amazing work with words here... just wow!
|Posted by Ava Blu on 07/09/05 at 10:07 PM|
yes, yes, oh yessss!! your cock can talk to me any (every) day.
|Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 07/11/05 at 03:10 PM|
That's quite the cocking! I like the sarcasm, the grit, the rawness.
|Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 07/11/05 at 06:54 PM|
now THIS!!!! now THIS!!!! ... is FABULOUS!
|Posted by Ashok Sharda on 07/12/05 at 03:46 PM|
Well, its the usage that means what means..
|Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 07/13/05 at 03:04 AM|
HOT...and haven't we all been in those moments you describe so well! You've taken ordinary longing and lust into beauty, into art.
|Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 07/13/05 at 08:41 AM|
so great! i don't even know what to say, but you sir are bad ass! keep'em coming.
|Posted by Lauren Singer on 09/28/05 at 08:08 PM|
damn. damn damn damn, this is hot and so true. especially "effing me with their stares." what words.
|Posted by Amanda L Marron on 09/15/08 at 10:19 AM|
this is so raw and sensual. i absolutely adore it!
|Posted by Mo Couts on 08/17/11 at 02:02 PM|
THIS is art. THIS is wonderful, Bradd!