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Cheese Hearts

by Uriel Tovar

her pink and white
keds
lit up the chuck e. cheese
floor
leaving a stream of light on that
dull green carpet.
she laughed with all her
thin white teeth showing
ran back
and grabbed my finger
gripping it tight with her fist.

07/06/2005

Posted on 07/06/2005
Copyright © 2020 Uriel Tovar

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 07/10/05 at 12:56 AM

Uriel, you capture "the moment" of your niece descriptively, but how you could think in the middle of Chuck E. Cheeses is beyond me. LOL! But what a nice uncle to take her there.
~Chelle~

Posted by Rula Shin on 07/20/05 at 05:22 PM

All I have to say is that I'm smiling BIG at this beautiful scene. The love is so apparent, the impressions present and shared so precious.

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