by Uriel Tovar
her pink and white
lit up the chuck e. cheese
leaving a stream of light on that
dull green carpet.
she laughed with all her
thin white teeth showing
and grabbed my finger
gripping it tight with her fist.
Posted on 07/06/2005
Copyright © 2020 Uriel Tovar
|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Michelle Angelini on 07/10/05 at 12:56 AM|
Uriel, you capture "the moment" of your niece descriptively, but how you could think in the middle of Chuck E. Cheeses is beyond me. LOL! But what a nice uncle to take her there.
|Posted by Rula Shin on 07/20/05 at 05:22 PM|
All I have to say is that I'm smiling BIG at this beautiful scene. The love is so apparent, the impressions present and shared so precious.