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I remember

by Ava Blu

18 sitting in a tree house
while the rain drizzled

you were writing every word I spoke
in pencil
so it couldn’t wash away

each tone was magical
every syllable divine
you sighed with my every breath

you didn’t like poetry
never saw inspiration
but you always had to hear mine

you recognized it as the key
to comprehending me

I could stop writing
about all the “you’s”

but in every “you,”
there is
mostly me.

07/05/2005

Posted on 07/05/2005
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Melanie J Yarbrough on 07/05/05 at 01:54 PM

love it. especially how you spread out the word "you" from a specific meaning in the beginning to a general subject in the end. flows well

Posted by Anita Mac on 07/08/05 at 03:29 AM

The ending definitely rings true for poets everywhere... almost everywhere? lol Anyway, great read... ~Nita

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