18 sitting in a tree house while the rain drizzled you were writing every word I spoke in pencil so it couldnt wash away each tone was magical every syllable divine you sighed with my every breath you didnt like poetry never saw inspiration but you always had to hear mine you recognized it as the key to comprehending me I could stop writing about all the yous but in every you, there is mostly me.
07/05/2005
love it. especially how you spread out the word "you" from a specific meaning in the beginning to a general subject in the end. flows well
The ending definitely rings true for poets everywhere... almost everywhere? lol Anyway, great read... ~Nita