Home

fourth.

by Melanie J Yarbrough

parked in a turning lane
sitting on ants
breathing air smoked from fireworks
shedding light on our healing wounds

07/05/2005

Posted on 07/05/2005
Copyright © 2024 Melanie J Yarbrough

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ava Blu on 07/05/05 at 06:02 AM

don't know how many of these you plan on doing, but I've been enjoying them. see, if you keep purging, there will be nothing left. (at least maybe no pain?) I think every line is strong and I love all 4.

Posted by Paul Marino on 07/05/05 at 06:54 AM

i love this mel. i love how you're writing everyday from your heart. you're an inspiration.

Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 02/03/07 at 01:39 PM

indeed this is pretty and very therapeutic sounding. fireworks are special aren't they? they always seem to mean so much more than just colored lights...kind of like life, there's always more to it than what you see. glad you're all healed up. ;)

Return to the Previous Page
 

pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online
All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)