I say that Im tough
But my heart is
Breaking into pieces
Pieces as small
As the sand
That slipped
Through your hand
And fall to the ground
Just like I did
I grieve for the sand
If it knows
Even a speck
Of the sadness I feel
Wishing to be back in your hand
But heat
The heat from you
Could melt
My crumbled heart
Into stained glass
Glass that you
Could step on and break
Into pieces
Pieces so small
They can crumble
Crumble into sand and slip
Slip through your finger tips
The way I did
06/27/2005
Posted on 06/28/2005Copyright © 2024 Nikki Benson
wow, i love the imagry you use here and how you tie the theme up. nice poem. x
Nikki, this poem is strong, in that it's cyclical. The theme grows stronger each time it reoccurs. You've given this picture of a broken heart a tragic beauty that can be visited and experienced in real life. ~Chelle~
Great imagery and flow great poem