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We
by Uriel Tovarsweetness got the
golden honey rain
pouring down on maple hills and sugar plains
we can't get high enough if we jumped
but baby got them juicy thighs and
scarlet eyes.
We washed down the sadness
with some sweet honey dew
bringing down that sour jive
the cuervo that was balanced
on your lips
i took a bite and that was it
thinking it would last forever. 06/27/2005 Posted on 06/27/2005
Copyright © 2024 Uriel Tovar
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 06/29/05 at 08:50 AM Like Lisa, I thought the imagery you present in your poem is vivid & might attract bees or hmmmmm... women. A love story in the making...
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Vikki Owens on 07/02/05 at 03:03 PM nice. good work. |
| Posted by Christina Butcher on 07/04/05 at 08:38 AM your poetry flows very well. i'm impressed. |
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