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[ 062505 ] I am complete
by Ava Blu
I date everything,
even just a word
I use the calendar to remember;
I want that compass for my life
I never was good with direction(s)
I dream in numbers
refreshing the past
[ 112698 ] saw the worst movie
with the best guy
[ 061190 ] I became an adult
[ 050604 ] the price of love was 9 hours
[ 031601 ] I killed
see, Ive always been good with math
if I take the day we met,
add it to the month of May, then
divide by tomorrow;
I end up subtracting you.
06/25/2005
Author's Note: This one is...different.
Suggestions welcomed.
Posted on 06/26/2005
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Jolie Jordan on 07/25/05 at 03:28 AM I love this. |
| Posted by Joseff Marat on 09/28/05 at 06:13 AM Interesting idea. I hope you didn't kill anything human. |
| Posted by Jo Halliday on 06/07/09 at 03:05 AM at least you've the advantage of writing in american format! these would be like 250605, 261198, and 110690 for me. now that doesn't even seem math to me; it more looks like i am on the assembly line and this number was tagged to me, scruffed onto my neck! and i moved on, hating but living with the number!
brilliant write again. |
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