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re in vent

by Frankie Sanchez

no one else gets it
when you say something
as corny/cliché/pop-culture
as
"laughing is merely smiling- out loud..."

no one else hears that
like
i
hear it.

i hear you say that;
you the dork, you the geek, you the inner-child,

and i want so badly to hold you
in a style unseen, in a manner unimagined,
i want to take you in my skin-protected limbs

and re-invent the hug,
re-invent the kiss,
re-invent passion,

peel away the shrink-wrap,
cut back on the cellophane,
undo pretenses and preservatives,
jump cut way back to before
such
things
were defined...

so you can know,
as i already do...
how precious and unique you really are.

06/25/2005

Posted on 06/25/2005
Copyright © 2025 Frankie Sanchez

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Felicia Aguilar on 06/25/05 at 08:43 PM

This is so great. I thought this was going in a completely different direction and was pleasantly surprised when I reached the end.

Posted by Erin Eymard on 06/25/05 at 09:52 PM

Wow absolutely great! I too wish that someone would write this stuff about me :) Instead I get love poems about being a pest =)

Posted by Bradd Howard on 06/27/05 at 03:17 PM

I have felt this before... wanting to create something completely new and different just to match what you feel for someone because it feels so fresh... thanks for reminding me of this

Posted by Tricia Marie Miel on 03/15/06 at 01:02 AM

my first thought was "Awww!" This was really sweet. Congrats on POTD. +fav

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