topic~blood red rain

by Kimberly Bare

it was raining the day i left

blinding rain

that washed away my footprints
and my tears

as i walked
i was thinking
the rain should be crimson stained

because you are dead to me now


Author's Note: Thanks to Amanda Marron for a killer topic!

Posted on 06/22/2005
Copyright © 2022 Kimberly Bare

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Amanda L Marron on 06/26/05 at 01:02 PM

great use of the topic Kimberly! i can feel the emotions in it, and awesome idea using red font!

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