Kourosh, I like the way you express the results of drinking too much. Your quatrain is full of implications, not just about the drinker, but how it affects society in general.
~Chelle~

not bad not bad here...something to consider is your use of the word "such" twice here... perhaps adding a comma or some punctuation here would help this small hiccup flow a little more smoothly... a nice little write you have here.