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Well Bonnie This Phoenix Could Use a Diner

by Howard F Farewell

Waking up from the impenetrable void
    Fingers grasping for anything and finally grab hold
       
      Waking up from a coma is by all means an understatement
         When you jolt up as if from a 3 month long nightmare
 
              Palm sweat dried and filled with your hands
                Gasping for air as her mere presence calms
 
        Blinking the burning light from these ashen reborn eyes
                 I could only ask
                    WhatÂ’s to eat?

06/18/2005

Author's Note: best if read with what now clyde -(kinser)

Posted on 06/18/2005
Copyright © 2024 Howard F Farewell

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 02/20/07 at 04:25 AM

Howard, I read Becca's first, but now it makes more sense after reading yours. They both have an element of ironic humor to them. Excellent. I like this form of collab. They are wonderful companion pieces.
~Chelle~

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