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like a boy pumping bullets
by Frankie Sanchezi remember the valleys of your body,
those soft, skin-protected parts of you
that, when touched,
when teased,
when tickled,
would always make youÂ…
curl like a serpent in distress
hum like an angel in heat
moan like an instrument tuned
and come like a boy
pumping bullets
into the current object
of his affection.
i remember where mouths used to land,
after fingers had fingered,
after tongues and hearts alike
were tangled,
were tied,
were teased,
and you, always with that whisperÂ…
two thick lips soft against an ear,
and you ask my permission,
sucking on an earlobe,
before bowing like an altar boy,
until you stopped coming
to church,
and I stopped worshipping you and your
soft, skin-protected parts. 06/12/2005 Posted on 06/12/2005
Copyright © 2025 Frankie Sanchez
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Paul Marino on 06/12/05 at 09:49 PM ahh. this is nice. wonderful descriptions; "bowing like an altar boy", & "and come like a boy,/pumping bullets/into the current object/of his affection."
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| Posted by Ava Blu on 06/13/05 at 05:42 AM that really was hot. i need a cold shower after that. i really enjoyed the descriptions (perhaps too much!) this must be added to my fav list! |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 06/13/05 at 03:21 PM 'to church' yes, the place to worship love. |
| Posted by Bradd Howard on 06/13/05 at 03:37 PM wow! this is hot! very well done... loved your descriptions and your words... very nice work |
| Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 07/06/05 at 11:15 PM love "curl like a serpent.." wonderful eroticness to this piece. :) |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 11/08/05 at 09:36 PM now that's a poem...very strong... |
| Posted by S. Pelham Flood on 11/16/07 at 04:08 AM pure erotica...so hard to do in a way that makes it interesting...afterall, sex is so cliche these days...one of the better sex poems ive ever read. |
| Posted by Melanie J Yarbrough on 04/23/08 at 05:32 PM blushing. but in the good way. |
| Posted by Meghan Helmich on 08/25/08 at 07:45 PM this is on my favorite's list, in case you were wondering. |
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