Meld by Charles J Hannan Looking to ignite Flames that meld our love To the point That our passion Is one soul 06/12/2005 Posted on 06/12/2005 Copyright © 2024 Charles J Hannan Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Michelle Angelini on 06/12/05 at 08:12 AM I think I can see the flames from here. One suggestion (take or leave) start with "I ignite..." it's more direct and a stronger opening. Otherwise, a very passionate poem... ~Chelle~ Posted by Anne Engelen on 06/14/05 at 02:32 PM only a few more weeks !! I can't wait, sweetie :) Posted by John Nivel on 06/14/05 at 03:14 PM Like good hors d'oeuvres; quick and delicious to eat, but we want more! Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)