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someday i will quit writing poetry about you #2
by Bradd HowardEven after all the years you have only belonged to me.
and I have always belonged to you- through all the other lovers
I have always been lost in you.
even when I sought comfort in the arms of others.
no matter whose cock I sucked,
whose lips I kissed.
whose eyes I sought meaning in.
They were all too easy to find my way out of.
but you are a labyrinth, a maze...
that I could be lost in forever. 06/01/2005 Author's Note: for noJ.
Posted on 06/01/2005
Copyright © 2026 Bradd Howard
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Paul Marino on 06/01/05 at 08:05 PM that's what i'm talking about; a little cock talk, some kissy kissy. like the title, love the honesty. |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 06/02/05 at 02:56 PM I agree with Ms. M about the form. I do like this. I always like anything crude. |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 06/03/05 at 03:28 PM "They were all too easy to find my way out of.
but you are a labyrinth, a maze...that I could be lost in forever" - by far the best lines here, and the most meaningful. I like the sentiment though I do agree that the punctuation is a bit distracting. Someday you'll stop writing about this person, you will bury the past and visit the graves only when it is useful for you to do so. Until then, keep em coming :-) |
| Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 06/06/05 at 07:05 PM ... there will be many more to come ... and i look forward to them |
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