Drenched in You by Matthew ZangenI melt with the alacrity of molasses
as you pour my lips
into the washbasin of your mouth;
swallowing the whole of my thought
with a delectable grin.
From the humility you taste
in the squelch of my voice
from closing distance on my face
to the depths of this choice
I am shame,
but your eyes still the twitch. 05/27/2005 Author's Note: Rewrite of "Drowning in You"
I think it stands up better alone.
The beginning spoke for itself.
Minor tweaks to please the tone.
Posted on 05/27/2005 Copyright © 2024 Matthew Zangen
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