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Killing a need

by Ava Blu


you’ve been chasing down his umbrella
because you lost the rain
wet pieces of his corduroy jacket
patched in your palm
yellow mixing with flesh

you couldn’t find his name
all the signs say
no u-turns here
but your hand is already behind your heart

sirens ring your ears
homicidal alert
familiar eyes on the Most Wanted list

flames mixing with fear
specks of ash adorn your hair
all he ever wanted (you)
held against his will

water rushing through fingers
to make your conscience clean
frayed lips turned grey

the edges of your eyes 
are forming a smile

he is taken
bound by lies
as a storm brews above your soul.

05/25/2005

Author's Note: Wrote this while driving on the interstate. I was inspired my Ms. Cristy M. to try writing while driving.

Posted on 05/26/2005
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Melanie J Yarbrough on 05/26/05 at 03:10 AM

"all he ever wanted (you)" I like this

Posted by Soulo Jacob Bourgeau on 07/08/05 at 07:12 AM

descriptive and visual. Love it.

Posted by Felicia Aguilar on 07/14/05 at 11:42 PM

Oh, my. This is amazing, the first two lines just draws the reader in. I used to be known for writing while driving until I almost got into a wreck. Now, I pull over to the side of the road!

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