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to the girl with the amazing licks

by Bradd Howard

I feel I must interject here.
butt my head into all this cacophony,
all this tomfoolery,
all this monkey doodling.
breathe in your jazz, your lickety licks.
Your wonder filled spearmint
and gaze in wide eyed wonder at the red haired girl
that pulled me under.

Covers... sky is a smurf blue wonder.
pens writing in symphony
an orchestra of poets she conducts.
I groove to your sweet, sweet rhythms
and float along sandless beaches.
(it's all in the karma you know)

You to me are like rambling poetry.
I can not stop the rush.

05/25/2005

Author's Note: for the beautiful Ms Cristy M... hope this diddy does her justice.

Posted on 05/25/2005
Copyright © 2026 Bradd Howard

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Paul Marino on 05/25/05 at 05:22 PM

haha, eric. yeah, bradd, it is well-written. i like the "lick".

Posted by Ava Blu on 05/29/05 at 06:08 AM

Ha, this is great! Ms. M is the best smurfy ever!

Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 10/11/05 at 07:22 AM

Congratulations on POTD! This one is so sweet, so quirky you just have to love it.

Posted by Kimberly Rhode on 10/11/05 at 08:10 AM

I love monkey doodling. Looks like Christy M is the lady of the day. So sweet..

Posted by Ava Blu on 10/13/05 at 02:44 AM

perfect potd! =)

Posted by Jim Benz on 10/17/05 at 11:33 PM

I was gonna knock the smurfy blue, til I checked out Ms M. Now I got no knocks - it's a fine little lickety lick of a ditty.

Posted by Veronica Phoenics on 12/09/13 at 09:39 PM

really great, loved this!

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