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The Calling of the Sea
by Quinlan L GibsonOcean motion, love potion; hot bikini, suntan lotion
lay me down and tear me open; we are by the sea.
Suck on; long gone, sweet and salty pressed upon
every night and every dawn; listen to the sea.
Aqua breeze, on your knees; tan lines, tickle tease.
Make me beg; Ill say please; deeper than the sea.
Crystal blue, eyes on you; look at me, see right through
you do me, I do you; is it just the sea?
Soft lick, magic stick; heavy breath, sweaty slick
slow and sexy; hard and quick; addict me like the sea.
Buried treasure, liquid measure; bend me over, hold tenure
I am yours for any pleasure; devoted, as the sea.
05/23/2005 Author's Note: ahh, the benefits and productivity of the ocean.
Posted on 05/24/2005
Copyright © 2024 Quinlan L Gibson
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Jersey D Gibson on 05/24/05 at 03:02 PM Now I want to hit the beach... thanks :)
yer pal
Jersey |
| Posted by John Ilotan on 05/24/05 at 03:40 PM Loved it Quin, Summers almost here. |
| Posted by Susan Q Tomas on 05/28/05 at 03:47 AM You are really really good at erotic poetry. The best I have ever read. True talent. Way to go Prima. |
| Posted by JJ Johnson on 10/05/05 at 12:58 AM very arousing and inspiring. A smile has found it's way to my face. I really enjoy the rhymes and the way the lines grab me, keep me reading and yet make me want to read the final lines, even though I hope it never ends. The climax of any story brings a quiet that almost seems sad, except that this quiet is more like a lull in the storm. Thunder is rumbling on the horizon... JJ |
| Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 09/20/08 at 02:13 PM Oh that's great. Sexy and vivid. Great rhythm that goes brilliantly with the images ;) |
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