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Worthy to pawn

by Ava Blu

05/16/2005
Author's Note: Just wrote this and it\'s my 100th poem posted on here.  I may need help with the title though.

Posted on 05/16/2005
Copyright © 2026 Ava Blu


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Posted by Paul Marino on 05/16/05 at 05:43 PM
great descriptions in the beginning jeanna. gets a little loose after the midway point, but overall i'd say you stepped it up with this poem.




















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