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Vision of Unity

by T.J. Carver

Distancing myself
This pain
This love

Breaking down myself
Her name
Her touch

Hollowing myself
Distrust
Deceit

Reconstruct myself
I fail
I fall

Gaze upon myself
So weak
So numb

Long to be myself
This pain
This love

Bring her back to me
Her name
Her touch

Myself incomplete
Distrust
Deceit

Carving out the void
I fail
I fall

Looking through these eyes
So weak
So numb

05/11/2005

Posted on 05/11/2005
Copyright © 2025 T.J. Carver

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Erin Eymard on 05/11/05 at 09:09 PM

It is a beautiful read though a bit hard to understand at times, though the sense of confusion is very well portrayed.

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