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Goodbye, Dear Friend

by Jaydon Cole

Drenching goodbyes fall around us
In torrents of memories sweeping through
The gutters of another lost friendship.

The dream started with a charge that
Arced across the sky in a blinding flash that
Left creation in awe of the power and

Died in a violent roar that shook what
Encompassed the tiny universe of our combined
Realities. The trailing silence awakened

A feeling of discontent for a lie that
We elaborately wove into our magenta sky
Now falling in drops of fragmented pride.


Posted on 05/11/2005
Copyright © 2020 Jaydon Cole

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ava Blu on 05/11/05 at 05:40 PM

I enjoyed your form. The sentiment is quite sad but it seems as though you have accepted it. Well done.

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