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Confusion

by Meagan Green

Mmm, those delicious mountain suns
remembering and redecorating my memories

and only the most excellent ones

Oh my, how!

Streaming meadows are sleeping with me
afflux towards sweet frost skies of the highest degree

and I'm only half way done

Wow, such grotesque mental absurdities
there is only one step from the sublime to the ridiculous

and I'm not talking about the quiet ones

So now I'm back with the gentle tides
happy as the day is long for now somehow

and to think I'm nearly done

Oh god, no!

Besides, abstractions are just shades
of phantoms, ghosts, and smothered dreams

and confusion always writes poems

05/10/2005

Posted on 05/10/2005
Copyright © 2024 Meagan Green

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kimberly Bare on 05/11/05 at 09:52 PM

Welcome to Pathetic! Great poem...i really like the last 3 lines...looking forward to more.

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 05/12/05 at 08:53 AM

Meagan, I enjoyed reading your initial effort. You are not afraid to use language to create vivid and unusual imagery. Welcome to pathetic! I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Chelle~

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 10/03/06 at 10:14 PM

Very Interesting. Enjoyed this.

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