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Moment # 2
by Scott Cadence
your whisper in the morning
made itÂ’s parting in a song
hovering just above a dream
on the fermata
the notes and tones
copyright themselves
automatically in me
enunciating the beats of my heart
on the fermata
no one could have taken me that far
as you did in one breath
making peace of the war inside
bringing dream into reality
on the coat tails
on the fermata
on the fermata
of you
05/10/2005 Posted on 05/10/2005
Copyright © 2024 Scott Cadence
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Bradd Howard on 05/10/05 at 07:05 PM this is a lovely little piece... what a great word fermata.. rolls right off the tongue... good work |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 05/12/05 at 09:12 AM Scott, I enjoyed reading this different type of love poem. The elements you combined, the word "fermata," and the beginning whisper, which travels right through the poem. Wonderful. ;-)
~Chelle~ |
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