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Wake me up

by Sam Roberts

The sky blue rug tucks itself under my hair,
Over my wasted shoulders and covers negative space
Dispossessed from my bed, but a comfortable choice for now,
So the floor feels less lonely, and frankly so do I

No constraints, no thinking.
These rested legs dig my rutted stomach
This may be my only feeling, when you feel like a hollow head,
A detached spoon from it’s coffee

Once said, was that feeling is always with us
And maybe I’m just sad and unattached,
All I feel now is your ghost
And how is that anything?
It doesn’t hurt or bruise me,
Just cuts straight through me

05/02/2005

Posted on 05/02/2005
Copyright © 2024 Sam Roberts

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Richard Trotter on 05/06/05 at 12:34 AM

very atmospheric , the imagery is haunting.

Posted by Robin Patterson on 01/07/06 at 04:46 PM

Sam- I love the last line....really wraps it up nicely! You have penned this one well:)Keep writing I'd like to read more of your work!- Robin

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