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Words of Dreams

by Maria Terezia Ferencz

faintly spoke a whispered dream
sotto voce secret softly breathed
I love you
her hopes dreamsong lost in breeze
ether whispers waft free
everhigher her words touched the trees
I love you
yearning so intensely
this want this need
sweet sound her whisper
gave rise to spring
burst forth blooms of want of need
dressed by love they danced these trees
her love poured out in flowerscent
drifted lightly downward
a sweet descent
the smell of her
whispers caught in the breeze
infected his heart when he breathed
he knew this scent
this want this need
he exhaled his hopes
in words of dreams....


04/29/2005

Author's Note: not finished just a thought....

Posted on 04/29/2005
Copyright © 2026 Maria Terezia Ferencz

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/29/05 at 02:26 PM

...maria! maria! this is stupendous...more than a few lines make meaning for me...'hope's dreamsong','bursts forth with blooms of want of need','love poured out in flowerscent','infected his heart when he breathed' ... all these move me along, beautiful metaphor use...all things have a "texture" and we miss it when we don't acknowlede it...you do...lovely work...peace,chaz

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