That Day

by Angel J McRae

Weak breaths
Shattered tears
Choppy body jerks
Heaviness of mass
Clobbering defenses
Mumbled words
Slipping past trembling lips


Posted on 04/27/2005
Copyright © 2024 Angel J McRae

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jared Fladeland on 08/14/06 at 10:43 PM

this. makes me constantly think. I like the vagueness of subject matter. how it simply points you in a direction, and you're forced to fill in blanks that could make it more frightening, or nerve wracking, or whatever you so be it. I like that

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