| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Jeffrey Parren on 04/27/05 at 06:13 AM chocolate ice cream makes me almost as horny as this poem just did...yummy...~JPP |
| Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 04/27/05 at 09:47 AM Ohhh I love this.... |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 04/28/05 at 02:19 PM yum - very nice! |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 04/30/05 at 10:05 PM That is one of the hottest verses I've ever read. Tremendous imagery and tone. Thanks for sharing. |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 05/01/05 at 07:28 PM Well orchestrated, & a sound score - in reserving the chocolate as afters :) |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 07/31/05 at 03:31 PM yeah, deffinately cigarette time, this one deserves at least two. |
| Posted by Matthew Sharp on 09/19/09 at 01:57 AM i was loving the poem and then when i saw the note about ice cream i lost myself in the bliss of excessiveness:)
i loved the instruments of seduction. |
