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Topic~when you sing

by Kimberly Bare

subtle nuances
   in between the notes
    ignite a flame
      fan the fire

your
  soul-burning
    foot-tapping
      rhythm of desire

lingers in
  my mind
    long after
      the song is through

04/24/2005

Author's Note: Topic given by Alaina Schneider

Posted on 04/24/2005
Copyright © 2022 Kimberly Bare

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jeffrey Parren on 04/25/05 at 02:13 AM

i really like the flow and the sound and the images of this poem...it really sets the mood as well as reflects on its grandeur...~JPP

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 05/04/05 at 08:55 PM

Kimberly, I love what you've done with the topic, too. For every poet, the words, music, and dance is different. The 2nd stanza has a wonderful beat to it, because of the hyphenated words.
~Chelle~

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