subtle nuances in between the notes ignite a flame fan the fire your soul-burning foot-tapping rhythm of desire lingers in my mind long after the song is through
04/24/2005
Author's Note: Topic given by Alaina Schneider
Posted on 04/24/2005Copyright © 2024 Kimberly Bare
i really like the flow and the sound and the images of this poem...it really sets the mood as well as reflects on its grandeur...~JPP
Kimberly, I love what you've done with the topic, too. For every poet, the words, music, and dance is different. The 2nd stanza has a wonderful beat to it, because of the hyphenated words. ~Chelle~