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Journey
by Maria Terezia FerenczEnfold me in your heaven
a universe of arms
breathe to me softly
a galaxy of stars
show me all your oceans
in which I'm meant to swim
then dry me off with kisses
taste of salt and sin
guide me to the low lying
valleys of your skin
show me all the wonder
lying deep within
take me on a journey
of undiscovered flesh
leave me to lie
exhausted
asleep
upon
my breast
04/19/2005 Author's Note: oops they/then thanks Sir Charles
Posted on 04/19/2005
Copyright © 2024 Maria Terezia Ferencz
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/19/05 at 02:21 PM ...maria, i like the transition of the ALLNESS of everything--then you relate it all back to you/us...which is the human thing to do...(query: did you mean "theN dry me off..." or is it "they"???), otherwise, i loved it...peace, chaz |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 08/09/06 at 07:37 PM Maria, this is beautiful. The rhythm and flow of the words, the rhyme, the words you use all blend to make the images you present sweet memories that are not soon forgotten.
~Chelle~ |
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