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"Flawed Arguments"

by Max Phineas

Quietly rocking
On the rusty swingset
Arched ever so slightly under our weight

Talking lightly
Of things so vague
Yet our minds race to manufacture new topics

Just as meaningless as the last four.

Five.

Six.

The tension mounts between us now
Anger floods our veins
And our flushed faces turn cold

Tears hover in the creases of your eyelids.

You rave passionately
And I object with my eyes
Squinted at the Sun

(Or wincing at your stubborn insistence?)

Vibrant statements
But your arguments are flawed
They are the same every time.

But I must give credit
Where credit is due:
You have a knack
For twisting your own words.

04/17/2005

Author's Note: I think this reflects on myself more than anyone I know. I'm known for my opinionated and argumentative behavior. I'm stubborn when it comes to topics in which I have strong beliefs.

Posted on 04/17/2005
Copyright © 2024 Max Phineas

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 04/21/05 at 10:29 PM

OK...sounds like the Beatles song, "We Can Work It Out," but an excellent job of framing your thoughts. If you believe in something strongly enough, hold your ground.
~Chelle~

Posted by Rebecca Lin on 04/23/05 at 10:36 PM

Wow! That's a great poem... very nice flow and wonderful words used! ^^

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