Summer Is Almost Here by Jeffrey Parrena confused terrain
of snow covered, frigid sand
a bright shining sun 04/13/2005 Posted on 04/13/2005 Copyright © 2025 Jeffrey Parren
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/13/05 at 11:12 PM ...jeffrey, i can "see" the spring coming, lovely mixture of snow and the "rays", peace, chaz |
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/13/05 at 11:43 PM ...jeffrey, i know your poem is about SUMMER annnd i'm a summer-person, but sping always escorts summer in, like a prom-date, so your summer poem reminds me of spring (being here)and it's to come...peace, chaz |
Posted by Paul Marino on 09/20/05 at 09:34 AM good good. the best haiku of yours yet. |
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