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Summer Is Almost Here

by Jeffrey Parren

a confused terrain
of snow covered, frigid sand
a bright shining sun

04/13/2005

Posted on 04/13/2005
Copyright © 2024 Jeffrey Parren

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/13/05 at 11:12 PM

...jeffrey, i can "see" the spring coming, lovely mixture of snow and the "rays", peace, chaz

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/13/05 at 11:43 PM

...jeffrey, i know your poem is about SUMMER annnd i'm a summer-person, but sping always escorts summer in, like a prom-date, so your summer poem reminds me of spring (being here)and it's to come...peace, chaz

Posted by Paul Marino on 09/20/05 at 09:34 AM

good good. the best haiku of yours yet.

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