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Weightless Belief
by Ava Blu
"Admit, that a wise man can instruct fools."--Voltaire
04/09/2005 Author's Note:
There have been studies
to show that everyone loses
the same amount of weight when they die.
It has been said that this could be the soul.
Posted on 04/09/2005
Copyright © 2026 Ava Blu
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 04/09/05 at 04:16 PM an interesting piece, especially when put into context with your note. the first stanza is awesome, and the rest of the poem followed suite. excellent work. |
| Posted by Shonda Chrissonberry on 04/09/05 at 07:35 PM yes, 21 grams it is ~ and the movie is worth watching ~ really love this one Jeanna, one of your best :) |
| Posted by Paul Marino on 04/10/05 at 05:21 PM wow, amazing last line, which i didn't get the first time i read it. you think your soul is corrupt? well, you don't have to answer. i know you well enough to know what you think and how you feel. probably your best poem ever. sincerely, shawnelle |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 04/16/05 at 06:18 PM ...then I think I'll probably put on weight when I go :)
Wonderfully dry and detached. Subjective, but I found myself convinced by your commentary - and I drooled especially over 'your exorbitant imagination'
a hot favourite |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 05/14/09 at 08:51 PM Flawless. |
| Posted by Uriel Tovar on 09/01/16 at 10:57 PM i'll stay heavy. really liked this one. |
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