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Dear Sweet Elizabeth

by Delilah Coyne

Dear, dear Elizabeth!
Everyone adored Elizabeth.
Docile, good tempered,
Playful, lively, strong.
Dear sweet Elizabeth!

Excellent Elizabeth!
My dearest friend;
My beloved girl;
Affectionate and gay!
Dear sweet Elizabeth!

Elizabeth, my love!
My future wife!
Beautiful! Great God!
I loved to tend her.
Dear sweet Elizabeth!

Innocent Elizabeth!
Hazel eyes, complexion fair.
Graceful. Rich dark auburn hair!
She consoled me.
Dear sweet Elizabeth!

Elizabeth- my bride!
I embraced her,
The most fragile creature in the world.
I shall never know more joy!
Dear sweet Elizabeth!

Elizabeth spoke.
“My dear Victor, what is it you fear?”
“I fear, my beloved girl,
Little happiness remains for us on Earth.”
Dear sweet Elizabeth!

Poor sweet Elizabeth!
A shrill and dreadful scream!
The purest creature, there lifeless,
Murdered on its bridal bier.
Dear sweet Elizabeth.

Elizabeth! Corpse of my wife,
Hushed, nevermore to be heard.
I embraced her.
I shall never know joy more.
Dear sweet Elizabeth!

04/08/2005

Author's Note: This is a "found" poem I pieced together from Mary Shelley's Frankenstein. Again, it was a portion of an assignment I had to do for an English class. Each line is made up of words and phrases I found throughout the text of the novel. I went through and hi-lited any and all excerpts regarding the character of Elizabeth and then put together what you see here. My intention was to capture the essence of Elizabeth and her importance/meaning to Victor.

Posted on 04/09/2005
Copyright © 2024 Delilah Coyne

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 04/09/05 at 03:12 PM

that's a really cool assignment, and you did excellent work for it. it weaves interestingly, and i like the repetition of "Dear sweet Elizabeth" by the way, welcome aboard the good ship pathetic, hope you have a good stay.

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/20/06 at 04:59 PM

A great summation of the novel- almost like Cliff Notes", but much better. A great read for anyone familiar (or not) with "Frankenstein"

Posted by Christel Crews on 04/04/06 at 11:07 PM

beautiful.. i love the idea of taking the core of one piece of literature and creating a new piece :) rebirth of a classic

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