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desperation

by Morgan D Hafele

underneath the white-noise
there was concern
for how he would die.

and after the beer turned sour
and his last cigarette,

-nobody thought- he would jump...

04/05/2005

Author's Note: just a late night drunken poem. i seem to be turning into an alcoholic, i don't think i've been sober a night since we've broken up.

Posted on 04/05/2005
Copyright © 2026 Morgan D Hafele

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 04/05/05 at 03:46 PM

Sharp right to the heart of it..

Posted by Graeme Fielden on 04/06/05 at 08:11 AM

you capture this moment in zen-haiku-like concision...nice work!

Posted by Graeme Fielden on 04/06/05 at 08:11 AM

you capture this moment in zen-haiku-like concision...nice work!

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