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dreaming reality

by Shonda Creemer

i sleep to forget
but all that
accomplishes is
more remembrance

these forever-dreams
that allude my
existence continues

to waste away
in the weight of
this darkness

defined as my
memories

03/31/2005

Posted on 04/01/2005
Copyright © 2024 Shonda Creemer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/01/05 at 06:07 PM

...shon, how can i say this: in english...gal, this is poignant and just full of statement...no whining, no madness, no complacency...the words speak a solidity with the Universe...and i smile...this is a great double-helix of wordology, m'lady...seriously, this is your TALLEST poem, to me...peace, chaz

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