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The Beach

by Jeffrey Parren

The waves can be heard
As background soothing tenderness.
In this most peaceful of destinations
Where two trees, hammock, and
Hours of serene reflection could
Turn a prisoner’s life into a prestigious
Existence. “You are here.”

I resign to an encroaching fate and rest.
(At least the intention was achieved.)
With little repose I am found
Struggling to enjoy relaxation.
Isaac, monkey of defiance, giggles
At my unrelenting failures. (I remember
That my forte does not include hammocks.)

Internal peace agreement lets the struggle go.
I agree to a cozy-looking spot. My mind begins
To wander and I feel something gently prick
My forehead. It does not bother me, until friends
Join in. As I raise my head at the speed of light,
My balance is lost upon the teetering hammock,
My rain-covered, sandy-clung, and sleepy-eyed body is at peace.

05/27/2004

Posted on 03/30/2005
Copyright © 2024 Jeffrey Parren

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 03/31/05 at 10:11 PM

...ahhh, you almost make "hammock-ing" in the rain seem pleasurable...do like the way it(the lazing of a day[at the beach]comes to be an accepted "whatever"--rain or shine--you're there digging it...good words...peace, chaz

Posted by Laura Doom on 04/16/05 at 12:00 AM

This beach feels like an island, harbouring an intangible darkness that arrived before the rain-clouds :)
'Struggling to enjoy relaxation' is a deliciously phrased dichotomy

Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 04/16/05 at 02:18 AM

ahh, i am a slave to the beach. this is an all time favorite of mine!

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