At Hello

by Uriel Tovar

was a kiss too soon
to say hello
or stroking your hand
too much to say goodbye?


Posted on 03/29/2005
Copyright © 2020 Uriel Tovar

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Shonda Creemer on 03/30/05 at 01:07 AM

Uriel, You said so much with so little. Love the simple complexity in this piece. :)

Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 04/02/05 at 04:59 AM

Sensitive and sweet like your picture.... :)

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 04/03/05 at 05:26 AM

Sweet minimal.

Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 04/07/05 at 09:41 AM

it's kind of like present, little package, huge gift, (that's my crappy metaphor for the day) excellently written,

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