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A Very Blue Woman

by Sam Roberts

Dance in a starlit sky
Now say it all Goodbye,
Because we know the truth, we always have
Drowning in your whiskey sea,
Your pockets are filled with rocks.

03/13/2005

Author's Note: Thanks Dave, i agree much better this way. cheers x Another poem for my alcoholic mother - denial and denial again does not save you. It's supposed to be funny..just laugh you'll feel better :)

Posted on 03/13/2005
Copyright © 2024 Sam Roberts

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Richard Trotter on 03/21/05 at 01:30 PM

you should have more comments on this, its a great piece of work x

Posted by Robin Patterson on 01/07/06 at 04:52 PM

Sam- You have such a wonderful talent for writing...your passion flows through your pen, and I love the candid way you just "put it all out there"...this is a lovely piece and will go in my favorites!- Robin

Posted by Vimal Rony on 10/02/11 at 03:45 AM

Simple yet powerful. You really can be a lyricist.

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