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"Sunrise, Amorous Glow"
by Max PhineasThis is no longer a silly girl crush
It goes far beyond my cheeks when I blush
In your presence
ItÂ’s a genuine connection
And a heartfelt affection
And when you smile incessantly
And your eyes meet mine,
Expressively
Asking me to spill my soul into yours
My burdens are lifted
And all the pain that existed
Dissipates like dew in the rising sun
03/06/2005 Author's Note: Had trouble thinking of a title..Thank goodness it came to me. This is just what I've been feeling. It's almost indescribable..Thank goodness for poetry.
Posted on 03/07/2005
Copyright © 2024 Max Phineas
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Holly H Dunne on 03/13/05 at 07:56 PM i rememeber this feeling. dreamt i felt like that again last night actaully so quite a coincidence finding this poem today! i love the flow of this, usually i dont like rhyming poems but this works brilliantly. |
| Posted by Rebecca Lin on 03/28/05 at 10:49 PM Beautiful poem... Love it |
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