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Dear God

by Maria Terezia Ferencz

Dear God
Me again
with a favor
of course
questions
please
tell me
how long and what for your plan will it be
to bring more torture and pain for me
when will it be over I know I have sinned
but this
pain it
is hard
it hurts
deep
within
let me
in please
show
me the
way to
stop all
this pain
for solace
I pray

02/28/2005

Posted on 03/01/2005
Copyright © 2024 Maria Terezia Ferencz

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Shonda Creemer on 08/13/06 at 03:18 AM

Oh Maria ~ This is beautiful. I love the way you fashioned it into the cross. Of course we both know that Jesus is the only Way to stop the pain. +favs

Posted by Jean Mollett on 09/26/06 at 02:48 AM

Hi Maria, Great write. Lovely. I love the way you wrote in th shape of the cross. I've never seen it done that way. I also agree with Shonda.

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 04/11/09 at 07:28 PM

Sinply beautiful. The shape enhances the words- very creative. Even though i do not share your Religious beliefs, I share your questions. Excellent write!

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