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In Too Deep

by Ava Blu







I 





f 

a

l

l 



between 

your         life    and    mine



struggling inside this ditch



I break my neck 



trying to crawl out




02/26/2005
Posted on 02/27/2005
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kenneth Lau on 03/02/05 at 05:20 AM

heh nice illustration of fallin ;)

Posted by Marcus Jones on 03/04/05 at 07:37 PM

i agree. your words mimicing what the poem is about adds more depth to the subject... very nice

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