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Dig a little deeper; you haven't reached my heart yet
by Ava Blu
On the beach
We made love
The stars danced upon our bodies
One breath-taking instance
S h a t t e r e d
You whispered upon my soul
Every word I had ever desired
As your fist tore through these wounds
My guard
Demolished
Your eyes
Deceptive
I always was a fool
You had your shovel
Ready to bury what was left of me
But you couldnt penetrate
What I never gave you
I will never let you
Dig again.
02/25/2005 Author's Note: Topic was given to me by Aaron Amrich. Hope I did it justice! This is the first time I've ever used a topic.
Posted on 02/25/2005
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Sarah Graves on 02/25/05 at 10:18 PM This is great, intense and passionate. Really creative style too, that makes the content flow well throughout. |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 02/25/05 at 11:35 PM this is an incredible display of emotion... raw and real... i like it a lot... blessings... |
| Posted by Shonda Chrissonberry on 02/26/05 at 05:09 AM oh my goodness ~ that's all I can say ~ :) |
| Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 02/26/05 at 03:13 PM Right on target, this is exactly how it happens.
As you first tore through these wounds... how true those words ring. |
| Posted by Joseff Marat on 09/28/05 at 06:02 AM Jeanna, great words! I enjoy your spacing in all of your poetry - it really adds to the feeling. I would definately define it as your niche. |
| Posted by Nicole D Gregory on 01/08/08 at 05:19 PM Fantastic! ~N |
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