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it feels like ghee, clarified

by Angela Thomas

fact: you got me white roses
fact: i've never been sent flowers before
fact: they are in bloom
fact: you call me to wake me up
fact: i like it

hypothesis: if a, then b.
hypothesis: if b, then c.
modus tollens: if a then c.

hypothesis: a => b = you got me white roses, then i liked it
hypothesis: b => c = i like it when you call me to wake me up
modus tollens: you got me white roses to wake me up

hypothesis: if a
hypothesis: if b
hypothesis: if c
logic: if a + c <=> b

hypothesis: a + c = you got me white roses to wake me up
hypothesis: b = i like it
logic: you got me white roses to wake me up: i like it.

hypothesis: if a
hypothesis: if b
hypothesis: if b
logic: if a + b <=> -c

hypothesis: a = you got me white roses
hypothesis: b = they are in bloom
hypothesis: c = i've never been sent flowers before
logic: you got me white roses that are in bloom: you are the first.


02/21/2005

Author's Note: yeah yeah. i know my logic isnt exactly correct, but, you get the point.

Posted on 02/22/2005
Copyright © 2024 Angela Thomas

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Timothy Somers on 02/22/05 at 12:55 PM

I like this. The form/construction is fresh and untried. I especially enjoyed the "wake me up" reference & intent. Thanks for the read.

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