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Old Love

by Jane E Pearce

Like a piece of wood-

maple or cherry,

square, edges sharp

with the rules and games

of young love -a splinter

or two of the fresh hewn

plaque, poking to remind

all is not in fun-

serious business- this

holding another heart,

carefully-not to squeeze

the grain dry, but to polish

it with a kind word-oh the rote

of learning how to love!

.

Some,  never blessed- the edges

 sharp and rough, scratched

by poison words and angry eyes.

but those who gather the golden grain ,

hang the old plaque on the heart ,

the patina smooth from years of caressing,

fondling , and filing

down the raw grain until

the golden maple color shines,

and the edges rolled smooth,

pass from one life to another.

That is what old love is-

smooth, shiny, burled, and beautiful.

.

02/07/2005

Posted on 02/07/2005
Copyright © 2026 Jane E Pearce

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ulyss Rubey on 02/07/05 at 06:25 PM

Much more comfortable with the sharp edges worn away and even the scars from the old scratches soft and faded. Great write! ulyss.......onward ever

Posted by Christel Crews on 02/10/05 at 05:13 PM

this is a beautiful piece, jane! you have described something that so many only dream about :)

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 02/11/05 at 12:43 AM

this is so full of rich over and under tones, i could cry... beautiful, nostalgic and longing... blessings...

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