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Whispered words

by Amy Niggel

I watched the light
as the sunset touched your hair,
brushed it from your eyes,
and lingered longingly on your cheeks.
I know how that light feels
so my fingertips trace the shadows
your eyes,
and ears
and lips
lingering lovingly on your skin
wanting nothing so much as to hold on
in that twillight moment
I lost my heart
in the whispered words "I love you"

02/03/2005

Author's Note: sleep deprivation yeah that's all I have to say here

Posted on 02/04/2005
Copyright © 2024 Amy Niggel

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anita Mac on 02/08/05 at 06:40 AM

I wish my poetry got this good when I go without sleep... Love the image...

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