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One small breath

by Maria Terezia Ferencz

Black velvet darkness
caresses the romance
whispers of lovers
a sleepy cadence
Stolens moments counted
In heartbeats
sighs of please
Time passes fast
between want and need
One small breath
so grows the world
from the winds of innocence
Galaxies Unfurl

02/03/2005

Author's Note: Still working on this just a beginning...I feel like the middle is missing..C'est la vie

Posted on 02/04/2005
Copyright © 2024 Maria Terezia Ferencz

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by JD Clay on 02/08/05 at 03:20 AM

This intricate, intimate, piece has major promise, Maria. Like you said, the middle need a little tweeking, clarification by stretching the thought, or maybe a strategic line break here or there. Pe4ce...

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